Wednesday, 20 April 2016

Hazel's Star Writer

Congratulations to Michael Rack in Hazel class for being this weeks Star Writer. He wrote a fantastic historical opening to 'Robin Hood' by incorporating colourful adjectives and creating 'Tell: Show 3' sentences to describe the setting. 

Below is one of his 'Tell: Show 3' sentence that described Sherwood Forest. 

Sherwood Forest was fresh, the shimmering sun sparkled into the daylight, and the ground was covered with autumn coloured leaves that had fallen from the colossal trees. 

Well done Michael!

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