Saturday, 4 February 2017

Willow Class star writer

This week, it has been decided that Lillie Mersh is our star writer, based on her biography of Fred the Bogeyman. Lillie, your writing has improved significantly, allowing you to produce exceptional work. You ensured you met our success criteria and included all the features expected of a biography: writing in third person, in past tense and in chronological order. Not only that, but you included a range of sentence openers and alternative nouns to engage your reader and, remarkably, incorporated a 2 pair sentence and a range of relative clauses. A superb effort Lillie, I hope to see writing of a similar quality (if not even better) in the future! Thank you for making it thoroughly enjoyable to read.

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