Congratulations to Samanyu Handoo for creating a phenomenal piece of descriptive writing, based on the festival of Raksha Bandhan. Not only did Samanyu ensure that his work was presented beautifully, but he also used appropriate adjectives to create 2A sentences, used a range of adverbs to add extra description and used a varied range of sentence openers. Furthermore, Samanyu did not just settle for using these descriptive features of writing, but challenged himself by incorporating similes, my favourite simile being 'Perched like prizes on silver plates...' Fantastic piece of writing Samanyu, an absolute pleasure to read. It is no wonder you are star writer this week!
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