Sunday, 2 April 2017

Willow class star writer

This week, our star writer is the absolutely phenomenal, the one and only... Libby Northwood. Libby has created an amazing, publishable worth futuristic story. I was particularly impressed with the build up she created, which she was able to do without any adult supervision. Although I modelled on the board, she steered clear from my example, adding her own flare and independently challenging herself to produce an amazing piece of writing. She included a 2 pair, a range of adverbials, similes, and I particularly like the metaphor she also managed to include to describe the robot... A pile of metal! Keep it up Libby, a pleasure to read :)

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