Friday, 21 April 2017

Willow class star writer

This week in Willow, our star writer is the incredible Finley Livingstone. Although Finley is an extremely capable writer, after examining his progress test, it is evident that Finley has exceeded himself, steering clear of the 'Lazy writing' bracket. Indepently, our own little author, managed to produce an incredible story based on Space in 2117. Successfully, Finley incorporated a range of sentence types, ensured he used a range of adverbials to add variety to his writing and strived to embed a range of descriptive techniques throughout, including similes, metaphors and personification. Outstanding writing Finley, that's what I like to see... 24K Magic! Keep it up :)

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