Friday, 7 October 2016

Willow class star writer

Congratulations to Godswill Hartford for creating a fantastic, descriptive story based on a visit to the funfair. This week, Godswill strived to produce a great beginning to his story, incorporating 2A sentences, a range of adverbs and did particularly well at creating imaginative similes, my favourite simile being: the next thing that hit the children was the sight of bumpers cars, colliding like two WWE wrestlers in a wrestling ring. He continued to persevere with his writing and produced a phenomenal story overall! Well done Godswill, I hope to see more writing and a similar, if not greater, effort in the future :)

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