Friday, 21 October 2016

Willow Class Star Writer

Last week, Thomas Royer produced an outstanding introduction and first paragraph for his information text, based on 'The Success of the Roman Army.' Thomas created such a great information text, that I even struggled to find flaws within it. Including beautiful presentation, Thomas was able to use a range of sentence openers, a variety of alternative nouns and even incorporated a rhetorical question to really engage his audience! I was certainly amazed Thomas, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading work of a similar (if not greater) quality in the future.

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