Friday, 31 March 2017

Willow class star writer

This week, our star writer is the unbelievable Jessica Simpson after she produced an amazing setting and build up for her futuristic story. She ensured she provided a descriptive setting for her reader to feel like they were immersed in the story, as opposed to creating lists. In order to do so, she used a range of adverbials, similes and even metaphors. Additionally, she managed to incorporate humour into her writing. I particularly liked when the teacher in the story told her class that they were the best class in the school (just like Willow!) You can now not only independently write, but also add your own flare. Super Jessica, keep it up :)

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