The Star Writer in Ash this week is Ethan Borrell. In our first week of explanation texts in Big Write, we imagined our perfect room-cleaning robots and wrote an explanation of how it goes about its work. Ethan's writing not only includes lots of high-level features such as adverbs of time and manner, powers of three and alternative pronouns, it also demonstrates a mature 'writer's voice' that will stand him in great stead as he prepares to move up to Year 4. Well done Ethan!
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