Tuesday, 12 May 2015

Ash Class Star Writer

The Star Writer in Ash this week is Ethan Borrell. In our first week of explanation texts in Big Write, we imagined our perfect room-cleaning robots and wrote an explanation of how it goes about its work. Ethan's writing not only includes lots of high-level features such as adverbs of time and manner, powers of three and alternative pronouns, it also demonstrates a mature 'writer's voice' that will stand him in great stead as he prepares to move up to Year 4. Well done Ethan!

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