Willow class advising Gertrude in Literacy

This week in Willow class, we have been working on writing instructional texts. Today, the children had the task to advise Gertrude on how she could improve the instructions she had written.

The children provided some insightful comments on how to improve Gertrude's writing by applying all they had learnt on instructional texts. 

Some children advised Gertrude to be specific with her instructions whilst others advised her to up-level her sentences by using adverbs of manner.

I'm now so excited to see the amazing instructions Willow class are going to produce in their Big Write on Friday. Great job Willow class!