Friday, 6 May 2016

Hazel's Star Writers

Congratulations to Yemi and Elena for being Hazel's Star Writers! Yemi wrote an excellent Part 2 of Robin Hood. She incorporated powerful dialogue and correctly utilised inverted commas. 

Elena wrote one of her best big writes up to date! She wrote a powerful part 3 ending of Robin Hood. Her carefully thought out sentences contained adjectives, adverbs, dialogue, similes and metaphors! What an exciting ending!



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