Wednesday, 22 June 2016

Hazel's Star Writer


Congratulations to Abbie for constructing balanced arguments as to whether students should or should not wear uniforms. She worked hard to independently think of her reasons and to write them down in complete sentences by beginning each sentence with a capital letter and ending them with appropriate punctuation. Abbie also reflected on how she will improve next time: "I wrote my big write in one giant paragraph and now I know why I need to separate my ideas in different paragraphs. Writing in one giant paragraph looks disorganized and its hard to read my different ideas. So next time I will skip a line after each viewpoint".





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