Friday 29 January 2016

Ash Class Star Writer

The star writer in Ash Class this week is Isabelle Reynolds. We were writing to appeal to Sea Parks to end the plight of their captive killer whales. Isabelle worked with impressive resilience and put a great deal of effort into using her best handwriting. Even more importantly, the content of her writing was lifted by her use of powerful adjectives and persuasive openers.

"I really wanted Sea Parks to realise how badly they are treating these poor orcas!" — Isabelle 


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