Big Write today in Birch class has produced some great persuasive letters! Children have written letters to Sea Park; persuading them to stop keeping killer-whales in captivity. They have all used lots of persuasive tricks to change the owner of Sea Park's mind.
I used a 2-adjective sentence to show the reader how helpless this creatures are: 'I firmly believe that these helpless wild creatures need room to roam and explore. Gavin
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