Tuesday, 29 November 2016

Birch Star Writer 25/11/2016

Congratulations to Jameel Ore for winning last week's Star Writer award! His instruction piece on training a troll gave clear imperative verbs that were easy to follow. In particular, Jameel's use of alternative nouns really made this piece of work stand out. I'm sure his readers transformed their useless, bridge-dwelling oafs into handy house servants in no time! Well done Jameel - keep up this level of clarity in your writing!


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