Friday, 18 November 2016

Willow class star writer

Last week, Jessica Simpson produced a clear, detailed and humorous set of instructions based on how to capture the brutish beast that is a... Troll. Jessica not only incorporated humour into her instructions, but also used alternative nouns for a troll (including alliteration), used a range of appropriate adverbials of time and even managed to throw a few double ly sentence types into her writing! Jessica ensured she did not settle for boring, simple sentences, but challenged herself by extending her sentences so that any reader (including an alien) could easily and successfully capture a troll. Phenomenal writing Jessica, keep up the superb work!


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