Friday, 4 November 2016

Willow class star writer

After producing an outstanding piece of descriptive writing based on a street market, Lucian Bundy is this weeks star writer. Lucian, you have used a range of adjectives, adverbs and similes to interest and engage your reader. You have clearly painted a picture for your reader, ensuring they have a clear image in their mind of what is happening in the market place. Additionally, I am super impressed with your ability to use a variety of sentence openers, as opposed to beginning every sentence with 'The, The, The...' A pleasure to read your writing Lucian, I hope to see work of a similar (if not even better quality) in the future. Keep up the great writing! :)




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