Friday, 11 November 2016

Willow class star writer

Last week, Caydon Buckland produced a clear and detailed set of instructions, fit for an alien, based on how to light a sparkler. Caydon was able to use a range of appropriate adverbials of time, used adverbs and extended his sentences using conjunctions so that his reader could ignite a firework with ease. Caydon particularly liked his instruction 'Next, sensibly ask a responsible adult to light your sparkler making sure you are standing in a safe place' as he had used an adverbial of time and an adverb, which made it a clear instruction for his reader to follow. Fantastic work Caydon, keep up the great work and your remarkable attitude towards learning :)

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