Willow Class Star Writer

Last week, Thomas Royer produced an outstanding introduction and first paragraph for his information text, based on 'The Success of the Roman Army.' Thomas created such a great information text, that I even struggled to find flaws within it. Including beautiful presentation, Thomas was able to use a range of sentence openers, a variety of alternative nouns and even incorporated a rhetorical question to really engage his audience! I was certainly amazed Thomas, keep up the good work. I look forward to reading work of a similar (if not greater) quality in the future.